Peer Revision Response

Peer Revision Response Sheet, Question 1.

After reading the whole paper in front of you, return to the first paragraph.  Is this paragraph effective in either: A. pulling the reading into the topic further; or, B. informing the reader about the general topic of paper? If so, how? If not, make suggestions to the reader about how one of these could be accomplished.

I did not find it interesting.  I think it is confusing and hard to read. It is also hard to understand and follow.  It would help if the thesis was stated more clearly and if better word choices were made.

What Is Trotskyite!?

Trotskyite are common theories that were encouraged by Leon Trotsky.  The group of people who believed these theories were usually Russian and belonged to the Soviet Union.  Many of the theories supported ideas of an economical world wide revolution.  Trotsky and his followers wanted to see a dramatic social change and a new assessment of capitalism.  Trotskyite was never very common in the United States. Trotskyism slowly decreased in the late 1930's.